The Right Decision

 

Yep.  It was the right decision to revamp the book.  In doing so, I think it will make the book even better.  It forces me to add more detail to the emotions that the characters are feeling as they are interacting with each other. 

Of course, I know what the characters are feeling all the time.  They live inside my head, but that fact doesn’t really help the readers, does it?

Of course, I could read the dialogue the way I hear the characters speaking in my head, but I’m not the one who will, ultimately, be doing the audio version. 

Of course, the additions are taking longer than I expected, but I’m glad I’m going back through and redoing so much of it.

Yep.  It was the right decision to revamp the book.  In doing so, I think it will make the book even better. 




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